September 11 lit work

 Today we wrote our corrections on yesterday’s work and learned how to correct it to make it more formal and complex and how to not use slang and use the pronouns right. I learned it well and it was a helpful thing to learn especially as a righting tool. Then we talked about cars and did my other online work.

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